#197297 by DanW (as GHOP 17), and keith.smith: clean up lots of help texts, update to drag and drop functionality, drupal.module removal, etc

1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions

diff --git a/modules/path/path.module b/modules/path/path.module
index 154e6065e..72eff8466 100644
--- a/modules/path/path.module
+++ b/modules/path/path.module
@@ -21,12 +21,12 @@ function path_help($path, $arg) {
 <li>node/3 =&gt; contact</li>
 </ul>
 ');
-      $output .= '<p>'. t('The path module enables an extra field for aliases in all node input and editing forms (when users have the appropriate permissions). It also provides an interface to view and edit all URL aliases. The two permissions related to URL aliasing are "administer url aliases" and "create url aliases". ') .'</p>';
-      $output .= '<p>'. t('This module also comes with user-defined mass URL aliasing capabilities, which is useful if you wish to uniformly use URLs different from the default. For example, you may want to have your URLs presented in a different language. Access to the Drupal source code on the web server is required to set up these kinds of aliases. ') .'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('The path module enables appropriately permissioned users to specify an optional alias in all node input and editing forms, and provides an interface to view and edit all URL aliases. The two permissions related to URL aliasing are <em>administer url aliases</em> and <em>create url aliases</em>. ') .'</p>';
+      $output .= '<p>'. t('This module also provides user-defined mass URL aliasing capabilities, which is useful if you wish to uniformly use URLs different from the default. For example, you may want to have your URLs presented in a different language. Access to the Drupal source code on the web server is required to set up mass URL aliasing. ') .'</p>';
       $output .= '<p>'. t('For more information please read the configuration and customization handbook <a href="@path">Path page</a>.', array('@path' => 'http://drupal.org/handbook/modules/path/')) .'</p>';
       return $output;
     case 'admin/build/path':
-      return '<p>'. t("Drupal provides users complete control over URLs through aliasing. This feature is typically used to make URLs human-readable or easy to remember. For example, one could map the relative URL 'node/1' onto 'about'. Each system path can have multiple aliases.") .'</p>';
+      return '<p>'. t("Drupal provides complete control over URLs through aliasing, which is often used to make URLs more readable or easy to remember. For example, the alias 'about' may be mapped onto the post at the system path 'node/1', creating a more meaningful URL. Each system path can have multiple aliases.") .'</p>';
     case 'admin/build/path/add':
       return '<p>'. t('Enter the path you wish to create the alias for, followed by the name of the new alias.') .'</p>';
   }